and you knew who I was, you recognized me, you noticed me~
and I was to shy to say anything~
Your eyes are really pretty but I just cant meet them~
they're blue like the water around these beaches~
I wake up and I can feel my heated cheeks~
just like, the way I've been looking for you these past weeks~
What will, I say if I ever, see you, again~
I'd probably, just stand there, and stutter like an idiot~
Let me dream about you every night, so I'll always have you in my sight~ <3
These things here ~ they are super fun to type out okay
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they remind me of waves~ UGH THIS PIC WONT UPLOAD WHYYYYWHYWHYWHYY okay it's working. Slow but steady. So anyway, this has been sitting around my unfinished work for a while now and I just decided to get it finished before the next joinme whichmaynotevenbetoday X.X AH I just got reminded of my hometown and I just remember how much I hate this place unu what was I putting here. OH I was listening to two songs while making this:
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[link] exact videos I was watching, feel blessed~ I know that light probably doesn't have that many dots of something in the glare but just let me have my fun.
I'm still in my pjs~~~~
art & Mini Rays (c) *
RaysblaydeiluMiki<3
My wallpaper was all dark and crap a few seconds ago
now it's all bright MIND=BLOWN
have your fun critiquing if you must pro
I put that button there just for you
working on shad's ref now~
GOOD LORD ITS FINALLY DONE
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I think I will with the cloudses and sky for a bday pic~ 
`ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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Well I know that you said that you already know that the sun doesn't produce that much glare in eyes, but I have to say it anyway. The sun doesn't produce that much glare onto eyes.
olookasignature~
Under the eye, I think I'm seeing a tear. Is that what I'm seeing? I can't say for sure, because it's gray and had red/pink stripes.
Hmm.. While the shading is quite well done, I do notice a couple flaws. On the back fins, there seems to be not enough shading, and after the first tube (on part of the body), I notice on the back (on the yellow) that you snuck in a bit of erasing in there. While I am sure it was intentional, I'm also sure it is incorrect. But I could be wrong. I see other shading mistakes, like on the tail fin, on the secondtube fins, on the earthingies, on the arm(s), on the neck. But I am just too lazy to spell out exactly what they are for yeh~
Now, I also find myself looking at dem clouds. I can't say exactly how they're supposed to be like at this perspective, as I do not really know myself, but I'm not entirely sure that that's it. Don't mind that comment if I am wrong.
But in all honesty I can hardly peel my eyes away from this picture. It's so beautiful, even though there are mistakes. Everybody makes mistakes.
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